Monday, October 03, 2005

Relations of life

Life and its myriad hues,
the joys and the blues
colour our bland lives,
build the staff of agedness.
Expectations make relationships dear;
soul's desire, overpowered and left unclear.
Blossoming kinships marred by the ego,
"Why should I always bend, forgive or let-go?"

Thoughts like these,

don't let people meet.
Even friends in deed
disappear when in need.
Some day in retrospect,
as we sit in tranquil solitude,
we realize our follies and wonder,
"If only, we had a different attitude."

For our self-respect is a euphemism of egoism,
for our love is a function of reciprocation,
for our happiness is a slave to response,
for our vanity we can't forego,
our relationships we let go.

14 comments:

  1. Anonymous8:28 AM

    i found your poem heart crunching... the world would have been so much better if we knew ourselves better!

    Divya

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  2. Anonymous8:29 AM

    its simply great kammo...

    but frankly tell u I didn't understand some bits of it....
    anyway u keep it up....great job

    Pooja

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  3. Anonymous8:30 AM

    Hey,

    the thought is good - my favorite..(topic) but didn't come out so well. [Is that a bad way to start your day?] :-)))))..

    Anil

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  4. Anonymous8:31 AM

    Hi kamlesh,

    very nice one.. its true.. most of the broken relationships if you look into has ego component..

    nicely penned ur thoughts..

    keep writing..

    regards

    Vinod

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  5. Anonymous8:32 AM

    Very thoughtful!
    Keep it up!!!

    Very best regards
    Surya.

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  6. Anonymous8:33 AM

    I have done this so many times and still continue to do it...Have only tried to improve upon this and the worst part is that i know that i am doing this.....hota hai babu......

    Regards
    Anshuman Gupta

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  7. Anonymous8:33 AM

    Dear Kammo,

    Very good one.

    Ashish Choudhary

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  8. Anonymous8:35 AM

    Cool scene buddy… v.good!!

    All your poems will have a crux. Few lines that hits reality in the most simplistic way which an individual wouldn’t have thought about.

    Keep goin…

    Alaap

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  9. Anonymous5:41 PM

    Lovely poem….. nice thoughts buddy

    Mihir

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  10. Anonymous5:41 PM

    I loved the last paragraph.

    Well written..

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  11. Anonymous5:42 PM

    Really good one…

    And I did understand completely….

    The concepts of life are put really well…

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  12. Anonymous5:43 PM

    Very True Kamlesh !



    Esp., the last 5 lines

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  13. Anonymous5:43 PM

    Good one man.. real good one. U have an impeccable command over language..kudos

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  14. Anonymous5:44 PM

    Excellent compilation Kamlesh!!

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