Thursday, May 15, 2014

Rose and Coconut

Once there was a rose and a coconut.
The rose was a rose,
the coconut was a coconut.
And life was good.

The rose gave flowers and its fragrance,
the coconut bore fruits and its water,
the rose was short and coconut grew tall,
and life was bliss.

One day the rose noticed the coconut
and took fancy to its height,
it then wanted to be tall,
and life was desire.

Slowly the rose evolved into something taller,
the flower became a hard fruit
and the rose lost its fragrance,
and desire was materialized.

The rose was neither tall enough
to be called a coconut,
nor fragrant enough to be a rose,
and the rose was now a Roconut.

The Roconut was now unhappy.
It was neither here nor there.
It prayed to be restored,
and life was remembrance.

Gradually, the fruit became softer
and the divine fragrance returned.
The rose was now short and in acceptance.
And life was good. 

13 comments:

  1. Rajesh Bala5:51 AM

    Wow , good one. All of us are roses but want to be coconut :)

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  2. Guruma5:52 AM

    Wow! Existence is whole, complete and perfect in itself!

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  3. Rishi Parmananda5:52 AM

    Wow, fantastic, what a depiction !! Thank you for reminding us that we all are somehow trying to be Roconuts ;)

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  4. Radha Sebastian5:53 AM

    What an insightful poem!! i'm looking out for words of appreciation....for the insight you have given through this poem....it is good to understand ....that unreasonable desires makes all of us Roconuts.... thanks for the insight

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  5. Umara5:55 AM

    Beautiful... Likhtey raho!

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  6. Sultaneh6:01 AM

    I love it. It's great. Beautiful.

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  7. Abhijit Mishra8:55 PM

    good one... it means people should not have "Swift Dezire(s)" in life..

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  8. Brijesh8:56 PM

    good one buddy...

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  9. Mujeeb Rahman8:58 PM

    That was really good Kamlesh

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  10. Annu Walia9:00 PM

    I loved the poem.... Keep sharing.

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  11. Manu Ahluwalia9:01 PM

    Too good champ

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