Monday, October 25, 2004

When Man kills God

When all that matters is material excess.
When mammon and fame become parameters of success.
When mortal success is the only thing pertinent.
When eternal human values become wholly irrelevant.

When man finds excuses to divide and discriminate
through religion, caste, colour and race.

When the eternal commandment of "Follow My Path,"
is misconstrued as "Follow My Religion."

When greatness of religion is sought in numbers,
proselytizing gives birth to communal embers.
When even charity ceases to be unconditional,
it becomes a tool for religious ambition.

When religious bigotry is rule of the day.
When fundamentalism is having its say.
Misinterpretation of holy text ruins humanity.
Secular voices drown in communal frenzy.

When Christ becomes greater than Allah.
When Krishna becomes better than Rama.
In these comparisons -- man mortalizes God.

When a man kills another in the name of God,
he kills, not man, but his own God.

7 comments:

Kamlesh Acharya said...

Amazing title..

Great one dude... could read through it leisurely. Well again the hitting lines are the end. The last but one is also excellent..

I guess this is also helping you improve your vocab.. All of your poems need a dictionary. n u use precise words.. cool scene yaar.. keep going..

Alaap

Kamlesh Acharya said...

(Alaap Cherry earlier - when busy)

too busy with things at office.

But couldn't resist from giving this "excellent" stuff a glance... this line was just smashing... "When a man killed another in the name of God, he killed, not man, but his own God." ... this statement is worth a
million dollar!!

KEEP THE GOOD SHPOW GOING!!! GOD BLESS YOU!!

Alaap

Anonymous said...

i'm not sure what to say yet except that i can understand what you're saying and am left wondering how you put the ideas all together ...

it is very catchy ... you need to read it thru and digest each line, the meaning the words .... then read it again ...

you have an incredible command of the English language ... and such depth of understanding and feeling.

Karen

Anonymous said...

That was truly truly amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

U can bring out certain hidden emotions in people throught u;r poetry. It really touches ppl where it should.

Great work !!!!! enjoyed it thoroughly!!!

Anonymous said...

Excellent Kamlesh it was too good ismein tere se kaun ladega :-)

Anonymous said...

this has been by far the best..!! now i know thats a statement, that u can misinterpret..but i m confident u'll take it the way i want u to!!

Total flat,
PC

Anonymous said...

Excellent Kamlesh….the title is really very striking……

Boss you are a gem !!! truly……