Seeking your reply, I again write.
In sheer despondency, my face is contrite.
Oh my Aphrodites! have mercy on me.
If you like it then kiss, else kill me...
What good does it do, to hold it
within you, your views on my work?
When all I need is an honest feedback;
a job you shouldn't shirk.
An aphrodisiac to romance my thoughts;
that's what your view is to me.
An honest critique of yours will
help this poet evolve and just be.
5 comments:
Hey kkk,
You don't have to be so much depressed....
Ya its very correct that criticism helps one to evolve more…
but as cactus doesn't really require anyone to water it,
it grows on its own same way you are also not dependent on anyone's comment or appreciation...
you are above all this (jayda ho gaya kya ;-) ).
Anyway's you can expect my comments may be a bit late, its better late than never.
Cheers,
AA...;-)
Apologies for not replying or commenting earlier.
Got a chance to go thru this todays and the 1st week at SP Jain story....must be worth experiencing....the latest one is good as well.
I understand the need,
Of constant feed,
To an artist's evolution
Or just fire his imagination.
It's not about praise,
It's about a different premise,
The artists sustains on constant encouragments,
And this comes from comments!
And like aphrodisiac,
You need everytime,
You need to make a go!
So, please give a "comments" placebo!
nice Blog
awesome use of language
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