Monday, November 29, 2004

We, the people

Forbearance we trivialize,
passion we idolize,
wars we ratify
and then pique we pacify.

Verity we transmogrify,
anger we mollify,
beauty we sanctify,
faces we beautify,
but thoughts we don't purify.

Vanity we gratify
pelf we glorify,
hypocrisy we dignify,
fame we exemplify,
rumours we amplify,
vices we justify,
love we mortify,
humanity we classify
and then unity we diversify.

Innocence we petrify,
achievements we magnify,
rules we defy,
truth we falsify,
success we personify,
complexity we simplify,
faith we mystify,
Gods we deify
and then prophets we crucify.

6 comments:

Kamlesh Acharya said...

Your thoughts always Gratify!!

Alaap

Kamlesh Acharya said...

Kammo......

I like the way this poem is written.
I like the truth that we know but never say.
It's really a great poem and the usage of words is superb.

My fav lines are:

fame we exemplify,
rumours we amplify

faces we beautify,
but thoughts we don't purify

Gods we deify
and then prophets we crucify

The last stanza is my fav in this poem.
I really like the way it is presented.

Great man !!!!!
Keep it up.

Amrita

Kamlesh Acharya said...

Kamlesh,

You have POINTFY the human nature in a very nice way..

I wonder how such thoughts strikes you and inspire you to organize them in the form of such beautiful lines.

Keep it up buddy.
Santosh

Kamlesh Acharya said...

I appreciate your friend's poem....... We, The People.
I hope Ashutosh Gowarikar will also appreciate the same,........... if he send it to him!
I can't comment on this poem .... because its simply the Best.... But I can add few more lines in it.


Still we stratify,
Do we testify,
Can't we identify,
Such poems we critify,
Inshort we have to citify

Santoshree and Abhijit

Kamlesh Acharya said...

Whenever I got your mail, I search for the dictionary... Hi Hi .. really ..

Not you, we are the luckiest folks who can read yours composition before getting released to the rest of the world.

Good composition. It was really a very good composition. I can say that you are the visionary now.

I think now the time has come, you should go public ..Send you composition to news paper.. Sure they gonna like it..

This composition you should send to newspaper.

Ashish

Kamlesh Acharya said...

Hi Kamlesh,

It was a privilege to enjoy this excellent piece ( and a virgin edition .. :-) ) of your poetic talent from the creator himself.

As I said, it was a bar raiser. Good thoughts and nice execution.
You are becoming a Seasoned Poet.

In continuation with the style of the poem, I can say this one is hi-fy...
And with that I will say ............................................By By ....
( 'e' is physically silent )

Keep it up.
Sunil