Saturday, July 28, 2012

Are we truly free?


Cold makes us shiver,
heat makes us sweat,
pain makes us cringe
and rain makes us wet.

At night we sleep
and wake in the day.
Every few hours,
we need to eat our hay.

Trample a dog’s tail
and it bites.
Brush a man the wrong way
and he spites.

We dance to the tune of money
and relish the taste of fame.
We rejoice the smell of power
but lose ourselves in that game.

So bound are we to these instincts
and so enslaved by this law,
that to call ourselves free
is but a major flaw.

Far away, there is a place,
so true and so free,
that it needs no law
save the one that lets you be.

That is a place of knowing,
where man his true self knows,
where love is all there is
and freedom truly flows.

11 comments:

Chandan said...

beautiful and deep..

Siddharth said...

Great stuff. It's very simple but complex at the same time. What I like about your writing is that it revolves around the truth of life that we all tend to ignore or overlook nowadays. Keep up the good work.

Ganesha said...

Profound. The free flowing energy is expressing itself. Heard from Guruma about your experience. Njoy the bliss.

Nipa said...

Loved the poem - free-flowing, reminded me of the Tagore poetry - "Where the mind is without fear"

Karthik said...

Wonderful read!!

Govind said...

Excellent Brother

I read your peom, beautifully said..

We are caught up in the matrix and do not know how to come out of it..

James said...

Nice ... from basic instinct, to everyday life, to enlightenment... great
piece.

Delnaz said...

Nice one !!!

Shernaz said...

Well worded poem. Congrats

Jaya said...

Hari OM, I do not have many words except ''WOW!!!"

Maria said...

liked this one, especially the ending about love