Saturday, March 15, 2014

When God chose to patent life

I woke up with a jerk
gasping for breath.
Panting and suffocating,
for I felt no air.

My heart went berserk
pumping like crazy,
needing more oxygen
but not getting any.

My bones felt weak,
yet I rushed out of bed.
Too heavy for my feet,
I fell with a thud.

I crawled out painfully
into the open balcony,
and raised myself somehow
to just breathe normally.

To my utter shock,
it was not just me
who faced this fate,
but the whole humanity.

Men and women writhed in pain
On pavement, road and portico.
Crawling, agape and smothering -
we were being wiped out and let go.  

Suddenly the skies thundered
and soon it rained.
I opened my mouth
and stretched my hand.

Again to my consternation
water didn’t wet my hand
nor quenched my thirst;
events I failed to comprehend.

I saw birds chirping merrily
while dogs pranced around.
I wondered what pandemic
could be just human bound.

I felt my senses slowing
and the brain getting numb,
as to the lack of air
I slowly started to succumb.

Even as death stared at me
and the heart faced seizure,
a faint prayer came through
as I looked at the fading azure.

“God, show me my fault
and tell me where I erred.
To be punished this way
What have I really caused?”

A voice came from nowhere -
baritone, calm and assertive.
It jarred my senses back
and kept me attentive.

“I made you free and let you be,
but you have forgotten me.
I watched your game in silence
waiting for you to remember me.”

“In separation you believed for eons,
thus seeds of vices you have sown,
ownership framework you created
that is yours and this is my own.”

“My creations you copyrighted,
then made the haves and have-nots.
Formed barriers to divine flow
causing rampant life clots.”

“Today I choose to play your game,
to patent life and make my name.
Follow ‘your’ rules to grow my fame
then beat you at it and deepen your shame.”

“So now pay the price for your life,
for all the good things that came free:
for your body, mind and soul,
for air, water, food and tree.”

I protested, “Oh God, how could you
treat this way your very own children.”
The voice responded, “I mirror now
your treatment of your own brethren.”

“I’ll give you what you want,
but let me just breathe.
Take everything from me
but let me just live.”

“Arrogant it is to think that you can
give me something I need.
For I need nothing but your love for all,
in thought, word and deed.”

“You think in this vast universe
You can own a thing?
When in this boundless existence
you are a speck of nothing.”

“See the spirit before you see the person,”
said lovingly that voice,
“See all, not as separate, but one,
believe in their virtue before vice.”

With repentant eyes, I begged for mercy,
apologized for letting fear catch my fancy.
Hoping to get life with divine clemency,
I promised to keep loving with consistency.

I woke up again with a start,
breathing normally as I usually would.
I thanked providence for my life
and breathed as deeply as I could.

I ran to the balcony to check
if this was just a dream.
I saw people hugging each other
as love filled life to the brim.  

I closed my eyes in gratitude
as birds chirped merrily around me.
Life finally found its rightful place 
when man let love flow and just be.

21 comments:

Guruji Prem Nirmal said...

Wow!!!
Great poetry and fantastic depth of understanding...
Keep it up!

Love n Blessings
Om Prem

Amol Mankar said...

Good one kammo

Manisha Koshy said...

absolutely fantastic...salaam saab!

Pradeep Ullal said...

beautiful, powerful..u rock kamlesh:)

Prakash said...

Amazing ...

Samir Gandhi said...

amazing...very nice..

Angad said...

really true and amazing ...

Brijesh Ranawat said...

Brilliant.. no words buddy.. what a depth and so real ...

Dr. Alpa Dalal said...

Kamlesh, no words to describe the experience of reading you poem.
My breath stopped while reading it.

Ramdas said...

Dear Kamlesh,
Your poem is of such sublime quality and grace as to be of the genre of "The Ancient Mariner". It is inspirational and thank you for sharing it.

Hiba said...

So touching :)

Tarik said...

Beautiful buddy

Angad Singh said...

Hi Kamlesh,

Really nice Poem, I think we all daily fail over & over again failing into this trap failing to appreciate what we have and crib about things we desire and by the time we realize the importance of what we have it has already gone.

Thanks for sharing it :)

George Tomy said...

Brilliant!!

I mean it…the dialogue with the Supreme was beautiful.

Proud of you my dearest friend :)

You are setting higher standards.

Annu Walia said...

Awesome! Thanks for sharing

Enrica said...

W.O.W

Sumit Sehgal said...

OMG ... this is brilliant and awesomest piece I have read this year... Superb

Dhruti Shah said...

Oh my! That was my one and only solo expression as I read through, and in-between lines of this absolutely stunning poem. The gods, they say, give breath, and they take it away. It is in between those breaths, that all of what Kamlesh penned, made gorgeous sense. Thank you for sharing this Chandan. I loved it and, look forward to reading more of all that he has to share.

Shveta Kheylani said...

ery well written kamlesh!
Chandan Navlani thank you for sharing.
"For I need nothing but your love for all,
in thought, word and deed.”

Anonymous said...

Excellent Poem! Well done!

Devika said...

You have put across mans ignorance and arrogance and his emintent return to innocence very poetically ... Loved the poem!