Friday, August 27, 2004

The Silence That Spake

The breeze was still, 
the silence was loud, 
there I was with my love 
as our hearts spoke aloud. 

The birds chirped to their nests, 
the sun was about to drown, 
and there we were, unaware, 
in the world of our own. 

We sat on a dusty bench.
My hand caressing my girl, 
she was enclosed in my arms 
like a string through a pearl. 

As the sun kissed the earth, 
I gave her a peck. 
She shuddered like a ship 
struck with lightening on her deck. 

She complained, "You're so silent when alone with me, 
with others you're so loquacious." 
I quipped, "With you I'm on a different plane, 
where silence, not speech, is precious." 

Quietly, we gazed into the darkness,
till our eyes began to ache. 
We didn't need the word of mouth,
for it was the silence that spake.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is a poem in which you have captured the true feelings of people in love.

Anonymous said...

Bhaii sabbb sahee likha hai...just too good.

The words u pen down are the best..
It starts my day much better ...
N I think my thoughts r the same as the rest...

Anonymous said...

Hi Kams,

fundoo....
jiyo...
tussi to changi poem likhne lage ho ji...

Anonymous said...

HI Kamlesh


Sahi hai sayar saar !!! Really it was the full toss.
I can not believe that it is outcome of your Romantic thought, it seems to be happened with you.
Well I do not understand the feelings and thoughts but I could manage to understand that you need somebody !!!!!

What you think.!!!

Anonymous said...

wahh..waahh...GREAT LINES..

ise pahele ke tu Devdas bane..juldi se shaddi kar...:-)

Anonymous said...

hey man..
its really gerat..
kya baat hai..
getting romantic.....?

lagata hai kuch ho raha hai..
is it..?

nice one indeed..very beautiful..

Atleast I can make best use of it

ha ha ha ha...

Anonymous said...

Wonderful this is really really nice but I have a doubt did u write this all by urself????or u had a girl in ur mind while writing this